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Zheng Shu Posted 14 years ago
Grammar

Can someone help me check my grammar and sentences?

Hi, i am writing a letter for my girlfriend, and can someone help me correct my letter? Thank You.
"No matter how high the sky is, and how deep is the valley. How colourful are the flowers, and how delicious is the food. How consummate is the music or how useful of the money.
You are the only reason that why I am existing, cause all those things can’t replace you in my life."
  

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No matter how high the sky or how deep the valley, how colourful the flowers or how delicious the food, how consummate the music or how useful the money, you are the only reason for my existence, because none of those can replace you in my life.

  • No matter how high the sky or how deep the valley, how colourful the flowers or how delicious the food, how consummate the music or how useful the money, you are the only reason for my existence, because none of those can replace you in my life.
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No matter how high the sky or how deep the valley, how colourful the flowers or how delicious the food, how consummate the music or how useful the money, you are the only reason for my existence, because none of those can replace you in my life.
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Do you intend to write poetry?

No matter how high the sky,
How deep the valleys,
How colourful the flowers,
How delicious the food,
How moving the music, or
How bounteous the money,
You are the reason for my existence,
And none of those things can fulfill me as you do.
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Thank you guys and give me the good ideas, and i am writing the letter for my girlfriend birthday.
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Thank you so much AlpheccaStars and give me the Great poetry, and i am writing for my girlfriend birthday.
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Thank you so much
Mister Micawber and give me the Great letter, and i am writing for my girlfriend birthday.

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