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The given charts illustrate different sources of electricity generated in four countries from 2003 to 2008.
Overall, it is clear that while fossil fuels was the top electricity source created in India and Vietnam, Sweden and Morocco used hydro power as the main source of electricity.
To begin with, fossil fuel constituted just over three quarters of the total electricity source in India while in Vietnam, the figure for fossil fuel was over a half. Additionally, fossil fuel generated in Morocco and Sweden made up the minority of the total electricity sources, with 5% and 4% respectively.
With regard to hydro power, it accounted for the majority of sources of electricity (95%). By contrast, Sweden and Vietnam witnessed this source making up 52% and 44% of their total electricity sources. India only used well over 10% of hydro power. When it comes to nuclear power, it was just used in two countries, Sweden and India, with 44% and 4% respectively.
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