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Guest Posted 21 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Can someone critique this thesis and give me suggestions? Thanks!
0 The topic of the essay is supposed to be our overall statement about pop culture. I have tried to be as specific as possible. What frustrates me the most is we are supposed to incorporate major points from 3 essays we have written over the semester and they are so unrelated. Anyway, here is my thesis. I know it may be a little long. Any criticism/suggestions? Thanks! 02 br
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00 Despite gender codes becoming less defined over time, I have found that women are still subjected to a narrow ideal of beauty defined largely by the media and women’s power continues to be subverted by that emphasis placed on beauty. In turn, beauty becomes a focus in everyday life as well and women are forced to go to extreme and even dangerous measures to maintain the beauty ideal. 0-
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00 Despite gender codes becoming less defined over time, I have found that women are still subjected to a narrow ideal of beauty defined largely by the media and women’s power continues to be subverted by that emphasis placed on beauty. In turn, beauty becomes a focus in everyday life as well and women are forced to go to extreme and even dangerous measures to maintain the beauty ideal. 0-
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0 Why do you think that women are still subjected to this, Guest - or is that part of the thesis? 02 br 02 br 00 I'm not exactly sure what your question is. 02 br 02 br 00 This is a little long for a title - if that's what it is.
- 0 Why do you think that women are still subjected to this, Guest - or is that part of the thesis?
- 02 br 02 br 00 I'm not exactly sure what your question is.
- 02 br 02 br 00 This is a little long for a title - if that's what it is.
- 02 br 02 br 00 You might try something snappy like (eg) 02 br 02 br 00 "Women, beauty and power", 02 br 02 br 00 or you could go for a more descriptive, but still shorter title such as (eg) "Inherent dangers in the search for beauty", 02 br 02 br 00 or "media images and the subjection of women" - depending what your thesis is about.
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0 Why do you think that women are still subjected to this, Guest - or is that part of the thesis? 02 br
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00 I'm not exactly sure what your question is. 02 br
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00 This is a little long for a title - if that's what it is. 02 br
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00 You might try something snappy like (eg) 02 br
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00 "Women, beauty and power",
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00 I'm not exactly sure what your question is. 02 br
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00 This is a little long for a title - if that's what it is. 02 br
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00 You might try something snappy like (eg) 02 br
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00 "Women, beauty and power",
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