Can someone correct this text?

Hi, i'm not so well in english can someone correct this?

Since I went to Hawaii 2 years ago, I've always thought about how awesome it was to havea navel piercing of my own. My dad was pretty okay with it, but my mum only let me a second hole tod do causative in my ears, and ecen though it would be nice to having another one, I wasn't completely satisfied. I studied up on the subject and looked at the pictures, which made me want it even more. I always be well behaved when it comes to following my parents' wishes, but once I turned 16, I was ready to show my independence. Finally my navel was being pierced seemed like the perfect idea. A close friend of mine knows of a place down in venice. When she had told where it was, I had felt a little bit uneasy, because if you live in California, you most likely knows what kind of place Venice is. I had to wait a bit beauseof a group of guys ahead me. When it was my turn, I layed down on the bench with my arms at my sides and started to get pretty nervous. My friend held my hand and I started to squeeze even before the thing actually happened!