Can someone correct this motivation letter & give me his opinion abt it since im not a native english speaker?

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My Name is xxxxx, I’m 23 years old. I’m writing this letter to give you a brief about myself and to express my motivation to join your master program.

I recently graduated from the French department of the faculty of Economics and political science of xxxxxx University. I also have a license in Economics from Paris 1, Pantheon-Sorbonne. I’m willing to pursue my studies in the field of International Management in order to acquire knowledge and expertise in management in an international context. My solid basis in economics will surely be an advantage for me. I strongly believe that a good manager must have good understanding of economics as it affects his decisions quality.

It is my ambition to work in an international economic organization (like the OCDE or the OMC) or in the import-export sector of a multinational.

I’m very interested in your program’s course due to its multidisciplinary approach in addition to the learning methods used that are practical rather than theoretical.

Since English is somehow the “international” or the “universal” language, I worked on improving my English so it can be as fluent as my French. I took English courses and passed the IELTS test with a score of …..

During the previous years, I have gained experience in multiple domains. I have worked as a project manager assistant for almost a year in a company named “xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx”. It made me acquire knowledge about logistics and supply chain management. Currently, I’m a teacher in an international French school called “xxxxxxxxxxx” who is a member of the AEFE (l’agence de l’enseignement francais a l’etranger). Teaching has taught me a lot on the professional as well as on the personal level. It made me more patient, more observatif and It had developed my presentation and communication skills, not only with my students but also with my colleagues who come from different countries and cultures.

I’m highly a motivated and devoted person and i’m committed to be a serious student.

Thank you in advance for your consideration,

Yours faithfully,