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Anonymous Posted 15 years ago
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Can someone correct my sentence please

With reference to the above subject matter, we are pleased to announce that, the 2011 Budget has been approved by In-Fusion Education Sdn. Bhd.'s Boards of Directors on 09th. February 2011.
Summary of the approved allocation for your faculty is attached as per above.
  

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Omit the first part and the last part; it is verbal diarrhea. We are pleased to announce that the 2011 budget was approved by In-Fusion Education Sdn. 's Boards of Directors on 9 February 2011.

  • Omit the first part and the last part; it is verbal diarrhea.
  • We are pleased to announce that the 2011 budget was approved by In-Fusion Education Sdn.
  • 's Boards of Directors on 9 February 2011.
  • A summary of the approved allocation for your faculty is a ttached.
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Omit the first part and the last part; it is verbal diarrhea.

We are pleased to announce that the 2011 budget was approved by In-Fusion Education Sdn. Bhd.'s Boards of Directors on 9 February 2011. A summary of the approved allocation for your faculty is attached.

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