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Anonymous Posted 10 years ago
Song Writing & Lyrics

Can someone correct my lyrics, please?

Nagging pain within my head,
I will not fall asleep tonight
Dread thinking who i am:
Don't wanna know the truth, it always hurts so hard

Every day i ask myself,
What am i doing wrong with my whole life
Have not even found a way,
Already lost it all, there's no retry

I will find own line,
And leave all of my fears behind,
Fighting, I will be never seeking shelter to hide
Get away, now i have steps to make,
They take so long, but i learned to wait,
On my way I will never look for shelter to stay

Locked all doors and threw the keys:
There lay my dark remembrances
Now i’m out of the house,
Built of dirty, mad and hateful stones

Past was dragging me back down,
I was too weak to say it no
Know for sure, i'll find a way
To be myself today
  

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'I' should always be capitalized.

  • 'I' should always be capitalized.
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'I' should always be capitalized.

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