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Can someone correct my english comment?
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Iam from germany! +
My homework is that I must write an english comment. The topic is: Can europe work? I 'LL be very happy if someone correct it for me!!!!! thank you!!!!! please send ist than to Email Removed
Today Eu consists of many different countries Recenthy new Eastern countries such as Hungary are members of the EU. There are many topics: Jobs for young people, workers with special skills, easy travelling, easy communicate, euro, big and small shops, communicate in foreight language, many companies move and machines replaced workers
Firstly, countries which are part of the EU offer the possible to find a job for jung people. A lot of young people need an job.
Secoundly,many European countries need workers who have got special skills. For example: People who specialice in IT.
Thirdly, there is a huge increate in transport of people and goods. Travelling has became easier. So employees can easily reach their working place. For example: If an manger travel in the morning to Rom, he can be back in the evening.
Fourthly, communication is easier. People can communicate with other European buisiness partners within a short time. So buisiness in Europe can operate better. If you want to write someone, you can use an digital letter. You can send it by Fax or by Email. This leters are sending in an short time to your partner!
Fifthly, Most European countries share a currency – EURO- trade is made easy. That’s favourably (vorteilhaft) because the currency does not have any longer to converted.
Sixthly many small retails shops cannot conpete with big supermarket chains and outlet stones in other European countries. A lot of people buy there products in big supermarkets because they get there so much products ans in a small shop there is less selection. The small shops don`t get enought money and must closes down.
Seventhly, for many people it is difficult to communicate in a foreight language. So they don’t want to move there homeland.
Eighty, many companies move and produce in other European countries to reduce the production cost. Furthermore they do not have to high wages and case for the security and safty standarts of workers.
Ninethly, a lot of machines replaced workers. Machines are better for companies as humans, because machines can work faster, machines are cheaper, machines can work 24 hours per day and machines can work more accurately (exakter). A lot of workers those had work a long time at an company are no longer needed.
In my experience can the EU work. Many European countries need workers who have got special skills. For example: specialice in IT. The IT programmer do not have to travel to an other land. They can edit their software at home or at theit companie in their homeland.
THANKS!!!!!!
Iam from germany! +
My homework is that I must write an english comment. The topic is: Can europe work? I 'LL be very happy if someone correct it for me!!!!! thank you!!!!! please send ist than to Email Removed
Today Eu consists of many different countries Recenthy new Eastern countries such as Hungary are members of the EU. There are many topics: Jobs for young people, workers with special skills, easy travelling, easy communicate, euro, big and small shops, communicate in foreight language, many companies move and machines replaced workers
Firstly, countries which are part of the EU offer the possible to find a job for jung people. A lot of young people need an job.
Secoundly,many European countries need workers who have got special skills. For example: People who specialice in IT.
Thirdly, there is a huge increate in transport of people and goods. Travelling has became easier. So employees can easily reach their working place. For example: If an manger travel in the morning to Rom, he can be back in the evening.
Fourthly, communication is easier. People can communicate with other European buisiness partners within a short time. So buisiness in Europe can operate better. If you want to write someone, you can use an digital letter. You can send it by Fax or by Email. This leters are sending in an short time to your partner!
Fifthly, Most European countries share a currency – EURO- trade is made easy. That’s favourably (vorteilhaft) because the currency does not have any longer to converted.
Sixthly many small retails shops cannot conpete with big supermarket chains and outlet stones in other European countries. A lot of people buy there products in big supermarkets because they get there so much products ans in a small shop there is less selection. The small shops don`t get enought money and must closes down.
Seventhly, for many people it is difficult to communicate in a foreight language. So they don’t want to move there homeland.
Eighty, many companies move and produce in other European countries to reduce the production cost. Furthermore they do not have to high wages and case for the security and safty standarts of workers.
Ninethly, a lot of machines replaced workers. Machines are better for companies as humans, because machines can work faster, machines are cheaper, machines can work 24 hours per day and machines can work more accurately (exakter). A lot of workers those had work a long time at an company are no longer needed.
In my experience can the EU work. Many European countries need workers who have got special skills. For example: specialice in IT. The IT programmer do not have to travel to an other land. They can edit their software at home or at theit companie in their homeland.
THANKS!!!!!!
Top answer
Hi, German guest, I'll go over it, but you'll have to pick it up here rather than by email-- this way everyone can have a look at my corrections, and correct them if necessary: 'Today the EU consists of many different countries. Recently new Eastern countries such as Hungary have become members of the EU. There are many concerns: jobs for young people, workers with special skills, easy travel, easy communication, the euro, big and small shops, communication in foreign languages, many companies moving and machines replacing workers.
- Hi, German guest, I'll go over it, but you'll have to pick it up here rather than by email-- this way everyone can have a look at my corrections, and correct them if necessary: 'Today the EU consists of many different countries.
- Recently new Eastern countries such as Hungary have become members of the EU.
- There are many concerns: jobs for young people, workers with special skills, easy travel, easy communication, the euro, big and small shops, communication in foreign languages, many companies moving and machines replacing workers.
- First, countries which are part of the EU offer the possibility to young people of finding jobs.
- A lot of young people need jobs.
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Hi, German guest,
I'll go over it, but you'll have to pick it up here rather than by email-- this way everyone can have a look at my corrections, and correct them if necessary:
'Today the EU consists of many different countries. Recently new Eastern countries such as Hungary have become members of the EU. There are many concerns: jobs for young people, workers with speci
I'll go over it, but you'll have to pick it up here rather than by email-- this way everyone can have a look at my corrections, and correct them if necessary:
'Today the EU consists of many different countries. Recently new Eastern countries such as Hungary have become members of the EU. There are many concerns: jobs for young people, workers with speci
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