can someone correct my email below? thanks a lot

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can someone correct my email below? i need to email to my colleagues. thanks alot
Dear all,
I would like to express my gratitude and thank you all to my colleagues, whom I have been working with, I especially appreciate to my senior for their extra time with me to teach everything, an advice that you provided and share with. Again, big thank for your support, sharing, encouragement, and all of the criticisms I take as my compliment and my strength to become a confidence person.
I am really enjoy working with <my current team> and please accept my sincere apologies if I had done or said anything wrong during my tenure. It was really a pleasure working with you guys?,
Once again, thank you and best of luck to all of you.

Iondida · Accepted Answer

really needs someone help me here. i got 24hrs to email this..huhu..<img class='emoticon' style='Width:19px;Height:19px;' data-delaysrc='https://uat-englishforward-forums-backend.s3.us-west-2.amazonaws.com/Emoticons/6.gif' src='https://uat-englishforward-forums-backend.s3.us-west-2.amazonaws.com/Emoticons/6.gif' alt='Emotion: sad'/>

Iondida · Answer

@CalifJim and others can you please help me to correct or check my sentence above?. i am new comers here.thanks a lot

Grammarfreak · Answer

iondidacan someone correct my email below? i need to email to my colleagues. thanks alot

Please practice and make a habit to capitalize and punctuate properly.
This is how I would write your email without too much mushiness :

Dear Everyone,,
I would like to take this opportunity to express my gratitude and say "thank you " to everyone, whom I have the privilege to work with and learn from. I truly have learned and gained a lot which I am sure will help my future endeavor. I can't say enough to show my appreciation for your support, encouragement, and criticisms, so I will just say a simple " thank you " from the bottom of my heart.
I have enjoyed working with everyone, and if I had done or said anything offensive during my tenure, please accept my sincere apologies.

Once again, thank you.

Iondida · Answer

thank you very much for your help.
i am really appreciate.

mushiness -means you said that, i keep repeat the same meaning? please advise. thanks

CalifJim · Answer

Dear all,

I would like to express my gratitude to all my colleagues, with special appreciation to my supervisors for spending extra time with me to share their teaching and advice with me . Again, a big 'thank you' for your support, sharing, and encouragement. I have really enjoyed working with <my current team>.

I take any criticism as a compliment as this has built my strength and confidence. Please accept my sincere apologies if I have done or said anything wrong during my tenure. It was really a pleasure working with you guys.

Once again, thank you, and best of luck to all of you.
_________________

CJ

Iondida · Answer

thank you CJ.
for your prompt reply. really appreciate it. now i know my mistake..

Grammarfreak · Answer

iondidamushiness -means you said that, i keep repeat the same meaning? please advise. thanks

Sappy, overly emotional or sentimental.

Iondida · Answer

ouchh..yeah i am too emotional

, my expression, my feeling and I didn't realize my statement too sappy huhuhu.. thanks for correct me.

hihihi..

can someone correct my email below? thanks a lot

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