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Formula 1 is one of the most popular sports all over the world. The game consists in a particular race with special cars that are suitable for the competition. The word "Formula" means all the rules that pilots and cars have to know and observe to participate. The word "One" means the only one pilot who can drive this single seat car. The Formula One's first world championship was won by the Italian pilot Nino Farina with an Alfa Romeo 158. There are may circuits for this competition in every continents. Every season the World Motor Sport Council (WMSC), the organisation that regulate the event, chooses the circuits around the world.

Mister Micawber · Accepted Answer

'One' does not refer to the single driver; it refers to the set of regulations for that racing car class.  F1 racing is not a 'game'.

Shawn79 · Answer

Formula 1 is one of the most popular sports all over the world. The sport consists of a particular race with special cars that are suitable for the competition. The word "Formula" means all the rules that pilots and cars have to know and observe to participate. The word "One" means the only one pilot who can drive this single seat car. ~~The~~ Formula One's first world championship was won by the Italian pilot Nino Farina with an Alfa Romeo 158. There are may circuits for this competition in every continent. Every season the World Motor Sport Council (WMSC), the organisation that regulates the event, chooses the circuits around the world.

Notes:
Racing is a "sport".
Preposition "of" used with "consists".
No definite article (the) needed before this proper noun (Formula One).
Singular noun follows "every".

Chiachen · Answer

Thank you for your review.   Could you also help with this: Formula One's cars are different from each other/one another. Their color style, depends on the famous mark used by a sponsor. The engine capacity of these special cars is 2.400 cc V8. Everyone must respect this limitation imposed by the WMSC. Now, the pilots' first position belongs to Fernando Alonso, and the teams' first position belongs to Red Bull.

Shawn79 · Answer

Formula One's cars are different from each other/one another (yes, either is fine). Their color style (no comma) depends on the famous logo used by a sponsor.

~~The engine capacity of these special cars is 2,400 cc V8~~. (V8 seemed lost here, try one of these:)
These special cars have V8 engines with 2,400 cc capacity.
The engines of these special cars are 2,400 cc V8's.
(or some variation where V8 isn't part of the "capacity", my opinion

)

Everyone must respect this limitation imposed by the WMSC.

Currently, the pilots' (driver is much more common in English) first position belongs to Fernando Alonso, and the teams' first position belongs to Red Bull.

(I don't know much about F1, could you say this instead?)

Currently, the number one driver is Fernando Alonso, and the number one team is Red Bull.

Chiachen · Answer

Thank you!  Yes, it's also F1.  Is 2,400 cc = 2.4 litre?

Shawn79 · Answer

You're welcome!
Correct, we use commas not periods for thousands, and periods not commas for decimals:
2,400 cc = 2.4 liters (litre = British English)

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