When was last time you were ill or had an accident? What happpend? How did you feel?
May be it wasn't the last time but I'm sure I won't forget it. I had a car accident when I was 12. I was crossing the street with my headphones on listening to music on full volume. I didn't hear the car coming towards me. All I remember is waking up at the hospital in pain. I had broken my left arm and my entire body was covered in bruises. My mother was very worried. I had luck. I could have been hurt much worse. At the hospital I was bored to death. I had to stay in there for five days and with my arm broken there wasn't much to do. Since the accident I don't cross a street without making it clear that no car is going to crush into me. I have learned my lesson.
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I would make a few, small corrections to your essay: When was last time you were ill or had an accident? What happpen e d? How did you feel?
— Doctor D
I would make a few, small corrections to your essay: When was last time you were ill or had an accident?
What happpen e d?
How did you feel?
I had a car accident when I was 12.
] Maybe it wasn't the last time I was hurt but I'm sure I won't forget it.
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I would make a few, small corrections to your essay:
When was last time you were ill or had an accident? What happpened? How did you feel?
I had a car accident when I was 12. [Note: Start with the event and add in the opening.]Maybe it wasn't the last time I was hurt but I'm sure I won't forget it. I was crossing the street with my headphones