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can someone check this to see if i have the correct tense thanks

0 00I am planning to summarize a TV episode on 01i00George Lopez, 02i00which aired on Wednesday, January 25 at 8pm on ABC. 01i00George Lopez, 02i00a TV series of my favorite primetime television shows of all time, since it started airing in 2002. That is why I am planning to summarize last week’s episode. At the start of the show, Angie (George’s wife) tries to make love to George (himself), so he can come to the meeting at Max’s (son) school. The two of them doesn’t realize that the meeting was going to be about “parents who didn’t go to college.”00 00George insisted on not going, but later he decided to go to Max’s school meeting. At the school’s meeting, there were only a few parents there, George thought the reason why there aren’t a lot of people were because he thought the meeting were for popular people and the losers couldn’t come. But when one of the faculty said the reason they and the other parents were here is because they didn’t go to college, and that would affect their child’s life on not wanting to go to college either. George was angry and said to the speaker, that he runs a big factory without having a college degree. Later on the next day, the school called home and said that Max didn’t attend school and missed out on taking an exam. Max came home later that afternoon and was confronted by George and Angie. After Max confessed of ditching school, he said that he didn’t want to take the test, because he was not planning to go to college because George didn’t go; so he shouldn’t have to go to college either. George then came up with a plan for Max that if he goes to college he (Max) will have to go too. George signed up for community college, when George attended the first day of class, he didn’t know any answer to the business question, while everyone else did. In the end, the episode ended with George passing a note and when the professor who is a hot lady, asked George to read what the note say, George read it out loud, “Do you think Prof. Lum is hot, yes or no?” lastly, this episode was the funniest episode ever, I only hope that I can summarize in a way that is funny.00 0-
  

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0I've highlighted the problems for you. 02br 02br 00I am planning to summarize a TV episode 00on00 01i 00George Lopez, 02i 00which aired on Wednesday, January 25 at 8pm on ABC. 01i 00George Lopez, 02i 00a TV series of my favorite primetime television shows of all time, since it started airing in 200200.

  • 0I've highlighted the problems for you.
  • 02br 02br 00I am planning to summarize a TV episode 00on00 01i 00George Lopez, 02i 00which aired on Wednesday, January 25 at 8pm on ABC.
  • 01i 00George Lopez, 02i 00a TV series of my favorite primetime television shows of all time, since it started airing in 200200.
  • That is why I am planning to summarize last week’s episode.
  • At the start of the show, Angie (George’s wife) tries to make love to George 00(himself),00 so he can come to the meeting at Max’s (son) school.
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0I've highlighted the problems for you. Some of your sentences are too long with poor structure too (especially the last few).02br
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