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Dni483 Posted 12 years ago
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Can someone check this please

Hi Rachel Would you be able to send my grades for the FMP and the overall grade for the year, as I can't access the university portal to check them out. Thanks
  

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Dni483 Hi Rachel Would you be able to send my grades for the FMP and the overall grade for the year, as I can't access the university portal to check them out. Thanks You may wish to add some punctuation here and there.

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  • Dni483 Hi Rachel Would you be able to send my grades for the FMP and the overall grade for the year, as I can't access the university portal to check them out.
  • Thanks You may wish to add some punctuation here and there.
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Dni483Hi Rachel Would you be able to send my grades for the FMP and the overall grade for the year, as I can't access the university portal to check them out. Thanks
You may wish to add some punctuation here and there.
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"... would you be able to send 'me' my FMP and overall grade's'.."
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"to check them out" is not really necessary as this is obvious.
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