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IGurvitZ Posted 14 years ago
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Hello, we are with JAVIXI, a member of the CoD: MW3 (X360) team, to tell us how was the DreamHack Valencia 2012 LAN for him and for the rest of his team.

Q. DreamHack Valencia 2012 was the first LAN event that you have competed at as a team, and, you did pretty decent. What's your impression of this event?
A. Well, the truth is that I'm extremely happy with the team. It was our first offline event, and we've finished it at the Top 9/12 place, which is not bad, at all. We also had a very hard bracket.

Q. We could also see tournaments of League of Legends, Starcraft 2, and don't forget the eSports confidence. What do you think of the organization of the event, and how well was it in general?
A. I'm pretty impressed. The whole event was quite large, and very well organized. However, I've expected to see more interest in CoD because there was a mainstage only for LoL and SC2.
  
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