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As you all know, one of the biggest LAN events in the world, DreamHack, took place last September in the city of Valencia. Teams and players from all over the world have flew hundreds and some even thousands of miles to participate at this LAN event. This was also the first LAN event that AeQuuS sent its own team to compete at, a Spanish Call of Duty: Modern Warfare 3 (Xbox 360) one, which has the following team members: BoRt4T, Re4perZ, Suareez and JAVIXI. They've done a magnificent task, finishing the MW3 tournament in the Top 9. You can view the complete tournament bracket at .

Mister Micawber · Accepted Answer

Hello, Gurvitz—and welcome to English Forums.

It is pretty good as it is. A few corrections:

As you all know, one of the biggest global LAN events, DreamHack, took place last September in the city of Valencia. Players from all over the world flew hundreds or thousands of miles to participate. This was also the first LAN event for which AeQuuS sent its own team to compete, a Spanish call-to-duty: Modern Warfare 3 (Xbox 360), with team members BoRt4T, Re4perZ, Suareez and JAVIXI. They did a magnificent job, finishing the MW3 tournament in the Top 9. You can view the complete tournament results at [ URL ].

IGurvitZ · Answer

Thank you so much.

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FINAL PLACEMENT: http://www.decerto.net/v4/index.php?threads/dhv-final-placements-thread.111261/
COMPLETE BRACKET: http://binarybeast.com/xmw31209220
Hello, we are with JAVIXI, a member of the CoD: MW3 (X360) team, to tell us how was the DreamHack for him and for the rest of his team:
Q. DreamHack Valencia 2012 was the first LAN event that you've competed at as a team, and you did pretty good. What's your impression of this event? A. "Well, the truth is that I'm very happy with the team. It was our first offline event, and we have finished it at the Top 9/12 place, which is not bad, at all. We also had a very hard bracket."
Q. We could also see tournaments of League of Legends, Starcraft 2, and don't forget the eSports confidence. What do you think of the organization of the event, and how well was it in general? A. "I'm pretty impressed. The whole event was quite large, and very well organized. However I've expected to see more interest in CoD because there was a mainstage only for LoL and SC2."
Q. You were competing with some of the best teams in the world, like apeX and SK, for 2 days. Do you think that you've learned something from their gameplay? A. "Yes, the truth is that we've learned a lot from the match against Prophecy, especially in S&D, and we hope to use what we've learned in future offline, and online tournaments."
Q. Many people have said that AeQuuS has been one of the suprising teams of the tournament, what do you think about that? A. "Many people have said that we would not be able to do anything and lose in the first round due to the fact that it was our first LAN event, but we've proved them wrong."
Q. Well finally, how would you summarize the tournament? In just over 20 days you'll compete in another offline tournament, the LVP Final Cup in Madrid. After DreamHack, do you feel better prepared for your next big tournament? A. "DreamHack had made it clear, we have a great team, that needs to keep training and fix some little bugs in order to be perfect and stay on top, AeQuuS deserves it!"
Perfect, thank you very much for your time, and continue the preparations for the Final Cup, which will be held in Madrid on October 27th and 28th. Go AeQuuS!

Mister Micawber · Answer

This seems to be an interview.  Dialogue is what it is; we can't edit its grammar.

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