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IGurvitZ Posted 14 years ago
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Can someone check this English article for grammatical mistakes, and improve its language?

As you all know, one of the biggest LAN events in the world, DreamHack, took place last September in the city of Valencia. Teams and players from all over the world have flew hundreds and some even thousands of miles to participate at this LAN event. This was also the first LAN event that AeQuuS sent its own team to compete at, a Spanish Call of Duty: Modern Warfare 3 (Xbox 360) one, which has the following team members: BoRt4T, Re4perZ, Suareez and JAVIXI. They've done a magnificent task, finishing the MW3 tournament in the Top 9. You can view the complete tournament bracket at .
  

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Hello, Gurvitz—and welcome to English Forums. It is pretty good as it is. A few corrections: As you all know, one of the biggest global LAN events, DreamHack, took place last September in the city of Valencia.

  • Hello, Gurvitz—and welcome to English Forums.
  • It is pretty good as it is.
  • A few corrections: As you all know, one of the biggest global LAN events, DreamHack, took place last September in the city of Valencia.
  • Players from all over the world flew hundreds or thousands of miles to participate.
  • This was also the first LAN event for which AeQuuS sent its own team to compete, a Spanish call-to-duty : Modern Warfare 3 (Xbox 360) , with team members BoRt4T, Re4perZ, Suareez and JAVIXI.
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Hello, Gurvitz—and welcome to English Forums.

It is pretty good as it is. A few corrections:

As you all know, one of the biggest global LAN events, DreamHack, took place last September in the city of Valencia. Players from all over the world flew hundreds or thousands of miles to participate. This was also the first LAN event for which A
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Thank you so much.

Could you also check the rest of the article?

FINAL PLACEMENT: http://www.decerto.net/v4/index.php?threads/dhv-final-placements-thread.111261/
COMPLETE BRACKET:
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This seems to be an interview. Dialogue is what it is; we can't edit its grammar.

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