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When Eleanor lost both of her parents, she moved in with her grandmother, Mary Hall. Due Eleanor shyness, she did not have many friends; basically her classmates thought that she weird. The years that Eleanor spent with her grandmother were awful. She would tease her about her look, dress her in young clothes, and simply denied her from any fun. Eleanor best years as a child probably came when she was sent to in . This is where Eleanor developed lifelong interests in politics, socials causes, history, literature, and where she met her role model, Marie Souvestre. Eleanor’s time at changed her from being a shy and awkward kid into a confident and intelligence woman. Three years later, Eleanor went back to , where she was required to attend more balls and dances, and also be more engaging.



Coming back from , Eleanor met her soon-to-be husband, Franklin on a train. Over the next couple of months, they fell in love and eventually got married. They did everything together in the beginning, including: taking long walks and taking long carriage rides through the woods. was her husband and her best friend. Early in their marriage, Eleanor could not do the things that a normal mother would do; she could not cook or even take care of her children. She was basically dependent on a nurse to take raise her children. Eleanor had to deal with her son Franklin Jr. death from the flu, and also ’s mother Sara who was simply controlling her.