Can someone check the correctness..?

According to me The main reason for our loss was we failed to get early wickets while we bowling, thus they got a100 runs opening partnership from Mr. A&B, and also We couldn't make a valuable partnership from our top order batsman. However thanks to Mr. X and Y for your remarkable last wicket partnership.
Guys we have to be serious about our performance since we are entering to our first tournament by next week. When we fielding our players Interaction was very less on the field.
Last but not least forget the past but learn from the mistakes and correct it for future games.