0
The112924 Posted 13 years ago
Grammar
Can someone check my informal letter (english homework)
I had to make an informal letter using some guidelines.
BEGIN LETTER:
18th October 2013
Dear Terry
I recently signed up for a contest. The prize is to be part of the TV-program Starmaker, where twelve musical teens get to live together in a house while constantly being filmed.
A week after I signed up I was invited for a meeting. Two days after the meeting I was called and they told me I was chosen to take part in their program.
At my arrival I met the other participants for the first time. Six girls and six boys including myself. Soon I had befriended Tim.
After a week or so I had gotten used to the cameras and I had singing-, dancing-, and music lessons everyday
The audience could vote twice a week about whom of the participants had to be send home. It was very exciting and scary at the same time. I had to leave after 5 weeks. Tim had to go after 4 weeks.
It was quite unfortunate that I hadn’t won, because the winner gets to record a CD and the honor to perform on live TV. But in the end I don’t mind I didn’t win, because it’s also nice to be home after some time.
I hope you will write back to me soon.
Best wishes,
Allard
END LETTER
If somebody has a question feek free to ask
BEGIN LETTER:
18th October 2013
Dear Terry
I recently signed up for a contest. The prize is to be part of the TV-program Starmaker, where twelve musical teens get to live together in a house while constantly being filmed.
A week after I signed up I was invited for a meeting. Two days after the meeting I was called and they told me I was chosen to take part in their program.
At my arrival I met the other participants for the first time. Six girls and six boys including myself. Soon I had befriended Tim.
After a week or so I had gotten used to the cameras and I had singing-, dancing-, and music lessons everyday
The audience could vote twice a week about whom of the participants had to be send home. It was very exciting and scary at the same time. I had to leave after 5 weeks. Tim had to go after 4 weeks.
It was quite unfortunate that I hadn’t won, because the winner gets to record a CD and the honor to perform on live TV. But in the end I don’t mind I didn’t win, because it’s also nice to be home after some time.
I hope you will write back to me soon.
Best wishes,
Allard
END LETTER
If somebody has a question feek free to ask
Top answer
Here are some suggestions: 18th October 2013 Dear Terry , I recently signed up for a contest. The prize was to be a (or "one of the parts") part in the TV-program Starmaker, where twelve musical ly talented teens get to live together in a house while constantly being filmed. ) A week after I signed up I was invited for a meeting.
- Here are some suggestions: 18th October 2013 Dear Terry , I recently signed up for a contest.
- The prize was to be a (or "one of the parts") part in the TV-program Starmaker, where twelve musical ly talented teens get to live together in a house while constantly being filmed.
- ) A week after I signed up I was invited for a meeting.
- Two days after the meeting I was called and they told me I was chosen to take part in their program.
- At my arrival (Better: When I arrived / upon my arrival) I met the other participants for the first time -- s ix girls and six boys including myself.
Get the Weekly English Kit 📬
New words, one handy idiom, and a 2-minute quiz — delivered to your inbox to keep your streak alive.
1 Answers
0
Here are some suggestions:
18th October 2013
Dear Terry,
I recently signed up for a contest. The prize wasto be a (or "one of the parts") part in the TV-program Starmaker, where twelve musical
18th October 2013
Dear Terry,
I recently signed up for a contest. The prize was
0
Related Questions