can someone check my grammar topic is why i chose my majr in business

Business management and international businesses are my majorities in business education. I chose business over other their education fields because it is the goal that I set, and it is they ticket to help my country out of poverty.

I was born in the country in which more than 70 percent of population is farmers. As an agricultural country where labor-intensive wet rice is grown the life of majority of people is closely linked with land, sun, and water. The world of business is something seems to far away for most of people. I realized that the strong economy makes a strong country and the job of businesspeople are boost up the economy and get more people involve in business world rather than agriculture. Developing the economy is increasing the people life that why I decided to study in business.

Furthermore, being a successful businessman, and having my own business is always my goal of life. Growing up in communist country in which economical potential has never been exploited correctly. I saw my people struggle to living, and I set my goal to be a businessman. Perhaps those reasons encourage me to come to America for education. This land is filled with chances, opportunities, and thing to learn. This is where I want to begin my long journey.

A lot or little I know my contribution to the business world will be counted. I would not think of some significant contribution to the business world, but I’d rather have some contributions to the economy of my country. A small contribution that would help more people gets out of poverty.