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Dialicia Posted 14 years ago
Grammar
Can someone check my grammar, please?
I'm currently studying to take the FCE exam and
I've just written an article, I was wondering if you could correct my mistakes as I don't know any natives who could
give me a hand with my pieces of writing.
thanks in advance!
Travelling has never been better
Have you ever travelled by boat? I know many people have never
tried this means of transport, but the obviously dont know what they're missing.
I live in Mallorca, a place surrounded by the sea where you can only arrive
by plane or by boat. Most of my family live in Valencia, which is a province
just in front of Mallorca.
So, I've spent all my life travelling from one side to the other. But I have to
make it clear that doing this trip all the time never bothered me at all.
Whenever I crossed the Atlantic sea I couldn't believe my eyes most of the
time just because the landscape and views were out of this world!
One thing I should mention thoug, is the fact that travelling by boat
is not for everybody, some people become dizzy when the boat starts navigating.
So you have to think about that before commiting the trip.
But if you are not one of those people, don't think about it twice! Believe me,
you won't regret it!
I've just written an article, I was wondering if you could correct my mistakes as I don't know any natives who could
give me a hand with my pieces of writing.
thanks in advance!
Travelling has never been better
Have you ever travelled by boat? I know many people have never
tried this means of transport, but the obviously dont know what they're missing.
I live in Mallorca, a place surrounded by the sea where you can only arrive
by plane or by boat. Most of my family live in Valencia, which is a province
just in front of Mallorca.
So, I've spent all my life travelling from one side to the other. But I have to
make it clear that doing this trip all the time never bothered me at all.
Whenever I crossed the Atlantic sea I couldn't believe my eyes most of the
time just because the landscape and views were out of this world!
One thing I should mention thoug, is the fact that travelling by boat
is not for everybody, some people become dizzy when the boat starts navigating.
So you have to think about that before commiting the trip.
But if you are not one of those people, don't think about it twice! Believe me,
you won't regret it!
Top answer
Hi I liked it. These are the things you need to look at... but they obviously don't know...
- Hi I liked it.
- These are the things you need to look at...
- but they obviously don't know...
- " Perhaps this needs some punctuation...
- - Whenever I crossed the Atlantic sea, I couldn't believe my eyes most of the time - just because the landscape and views were out of this world!
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Hi
I liked it. These are the things you need to look at...
- ...but they obviously don't know... you have missed a 'y' there and an apostrophe
I would not say that Valencia is "in front of" Mallorca
- Valencia is to the west of Mallorca
- Valencia is just across the sea from Mallorca
"Whenever I crossed the Atlantic sea I couldn't believe my eyes m
I liked it. These are the things you need to look at...
- ...but they obviously don't know... you have missed a 'y' there and an apostrophe
I would not say that Valencia is "in front of" Mallorca
- Valencia is to the west of Mallorca
- Valencia is just across the sea from Mallorca
"Whenever I crossed the Atlantic sea I couldn't believe my eyes m
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