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Babyblue_girl08 Posted 18 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Can someone check my Grammar please!!

I hope someone will help me to check my grammar. I know it has hundred mistake there. So please help me this paragraph.Thanks advance,I really appreciated it.

In the "A Circus", by Carry Farruggia. The author writes about the circus. Circus is the event on the holidays, Birthday, etc.She said circus is the opportunity to reunion Farruggia family. In the event it had several roles. Such as like, Lion Tamer, Clowns, Animals a snack at the circus. In Farruggia circus, they have their own roles in the plays. The Ring leader role of the family is taken by her husband, Matt. The Ring leader role is start the party started. She also said her husband role is to determination of the family. Next is Lisa, her role is the magician of the family. Lisa is Carry sister in-law. Her role is keep childrens entertained. She has an unlimited talents and she can do the animated voice to entertained the audiences. Carry describes one by one of her family roles in the plays. Her Grandpa role is the chuck. the chuck has many talents and play the awesome in the role. He tames the kids, juggles a story and he always hidden some gift in his sleeve to spoil the widest beast. She said without her Grandpa, there would be no show. Carry also mentions the children’s there, are very entertained every single plays. They running, jumping all the around. They also entertaining the dancing, singing in the show as well. Many friends and family comes to the Farruggia circus. They all enjoyable, surprises and gathering together. Carry roles in the play is a snack vendor. Her duty is responsible around the house. Like pick up the mess and so on. In the circus they prepared the traditional meals and untraditional snack too. She believes the circus can bring us happiness and enjoyable in the family.
  

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In the "A Circus", by Carry Farruggia. The author writes about the circus. She said circus is the opportunity to reunion Farruggia family.

  • In the "A Circus", by Carry Farruggia.
  • The author writes about the circus.
  • She said circus is the opportunity to reunion Farruggia family.
  • In the event it had several roles.
  • Such as like , Lion Tamer, Clowns, Animals a snack at the circus.
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 In the "A Circus", by Carry Farruggia. The author writes about the circus. Circus is the event on the holidays, Birthday, etc.She said circus is the opportunity to reunion Farruggia family. In the event it had several roles. Such as like, Lion Tamer, Clowns, Animals a snack at the circus.
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I could find one grammatical error. Children itself refers plural so no childrens in the fifth line of the passage.

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