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Anonymous Posted 18 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Can someone check my grammar for me?
Hello, can some check the grammar of the following words below?
I woke up in cold sweat and sat straight up in our bed, and touched the side of my face. It had all been a dream or a nightmare. Moonbeams filtered through our curtains casting a soft light in the room.
My husband lay on his side, snoring blissfully, unaware of my trouble dream. I snuggled close, breathing in his minted fresh breath. My hands ruffled his black hair, and I snuzzled his ear. "I love you." He muttered in his sleep, and tossed one arm around me. Lying back against the pillow, I whispered, "Father, thank you for revealing to me what you want me to know."
I woke up in cold sweat and sat straight up in our bed, and touched the side of my face. It had all been a dream or a nightmare. Moonbeams filtered through our curtains casting a soft light in the room.
My husband lay on his side, snoring blissfully, unaware of my trouble dream. I snuggled close, breathing in his minted fresh breath. My hands ruffled his black hair, and I snuzzled his ear. "I love you." He muttered in his sleep, and tossed one arm around me. Lying back against the pillow, I whispered, "Father, thank you for revealing to me what you want me to know."
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The only problem that immediately jumps out is 'trouble dream' 'trouble' is a a noun or a verb; you need to use the adjective form. In this case 'troubling' (the active participle).
- The only problem that immediately jumps out is 'trouble dream' 'trouble' is a a noun or a verb; you need to use the adjective form.
- In this case 'troubling' (the active participle).
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The only problem that immediately jumps out is 'trouble dream'
'trouble' is a a noun or a verb; you need to use the adjective form. In this case 'troubling' (the active participle).
'trouble' is a a noun or a verb; you need to use the adjective form. In this case 'troubling' (the active participle).
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I forgot to ask about the sentence: My husband lay on his side, snoring blissfully, unaware of my
troubling dream. I want to know if it is active present tense, if it's how do I change the sentence to
past active tense?
troubling dream. I want to know if it is active present tense, if it's how do I change the sentence to
past active tense?
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Hi,
I woke up in cold sweat and sat straight up in our bed, and touched the side of my face. It had all been a dream or a nightmare. Moonbeams filtered through our curtains casting a soft light in the room.
My husband lay on his side, snoring blissfully, unaware of my trouble dream. I snuggled close, breathing in his minted fresh breath. My hands ruffled his black hair, and I snu
I woke up in cold sweat and sat straight up in our bed, and touched the side of my face. It had all been a dream or a nightmare. Moonbeams filtered through our curtains casting a soft light in the room.
My husband lay on his side, snoring blissfully, unaware of my trouble dream. I snuggled close, breathing in his minted fresh breath. My hands ruffled his black hair, and I snu
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