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questions: classify the way five people you know look at life. discribe their attitude in some detal-optimistic, persimistic put yourself last.





People view in life are different from one another, five people I know of with different view in life are my brothers, friends, parents, co workers, and myself. First is one of my coworkers, he is always happy, no matter what gets in his way he always have that positive attitude. Secondly my oldest brother, he has a great attitude towards life. his attitude toward life is to love life. He and his wife have a nice car nice house good paying job. He works hard to where he is at, he enjoy every moment as life passes by but only thing keeping him back is his wife she’s a gambling addict, her attitude towards life is bringing his down. He decided its best to have a divorce, but out of know where she uses all his money he had in is bank and gambled it all. All the hard work he had all gone, right now his life is a circle, a rhythmic oscillation of events repeating over and over. Sometimes he feels as if the course of his life is on a continuously repeating cycle. He is keeping up with his positive attitude sooner or later he will be back to normal.

Thirdly my parents, Life to them is to be happy, no matter what the outcome are happiness will you lead you to better life. They both work hard, they have their ups and down. My dad when he’s in a bad situation he worries them too much and for my mom she always calm and positive. Fourthly one of my close friends, he has a good sense of humor always laugh. He’s a fun guy to be around. He doesn’t let anyone bring him down, he live his life to the fullest. Everything was doing great for him until he joined a gang, his attitude didn’t changed that much but he tend to have a high temper. He was in and out of jail; I don’t know why he wanted to choose that gang life. About couple of months ago him and other gang member was involve in a fight, He had a gun on him at that time, when the cops came everyone scattered, he was spotted with a gun by another cop so they shot him, he shot back, later he was trapped in a building, he knew he was going for life so what he did was he shot himself.

He left behind people that loved him, my attitude towards life changed after his death. I am trying to live my life in the best way possible and stay away from people that are negative, unsupportive, that live their life from the wrong perspective. Sometimes I even wonder if our purpose is just to live life and die. I always believed life took me where I wanted to go. I believe that college will give me the keys to unlock the doors of life. It can be an exciting time but at the same time it can be a challenge. To be truly happy you must be happy with the person that you are and with what you have. The most influential people in my life are my parents, they will always be their whenever I needed them. They are what keep me going.