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Lulu-uae Posted 19 years ago
Grammar

can someone check for me ... ? ( my grammar mistakes) ^_^

Many people like to live in a big city for many advantages reasons .Firstly, they can find job easily and get a lot of money at work and that related to high cost of living .secondly, there are large transport network they can transfer from one place to another without difficulty. Finally, more fun things and comfortable in a big cities. For example, cinemas, museum and malls. Furthermore, there are better facilities in education and sports. In stance, more colleges, universities and clubs.





Big cities also have some disadvantages. There are many traffic jams that form pollution air so can’t breath fresh air. In stance , is one of these cities have crowded. Moreover, the horrible noisy in the big city is another disadvantages especially at the morning when the workers and employees start work. the last cons is expensive cost of living.





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I know I have many mistakes,but you can help me.
  

Top answer

Firstly, they can find job [jobs/a job] easily and get a lot of money at work and that related to high cost of livin g. S econdly, there are large transport network [plural verb/singular subject : they must agree] so they can transfer from one place to another without difficulty. Finally, there are more fun things and comfortable in a big cities.

  • Firstly, they can find job [jobs/a job] easily and get a lot of money at work and that related to high cost of livin g.
  • S econdly, there are large transport network [plural verb/singular subject : they must agree] so they can transfer from one place to another without difficulty.
  • Finally, there are more fun things and comfortable in a big cities.
  • For example, cinemas, museum and malls.
  • Furthermore, [You have "Finally" in the previous sentence - so you should not have "furthermore" in this one] there are better facilities in education and sports , In stance [idiom >> "For instance"] , more colleges, universities and clubs.
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Lulu-uaeMany people like to live in a big city for many advantages reasons .Firstly, they can find job [jobs/a job] easily and get a lot of money at work and that related to high cost of living. Secondly, there are large trans
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Thank you very much Feebs11for your help .. Emotion: smile

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