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Poleshka Posted 18 years ago
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Can someone can tell me.Is my personal statment sounds ok?Im applying for FOUNDATION IN ART AND DESIGN

0On of the reasons why I want to apply for the foundation is to improve and expand my knowledge in the field of art and design.I also really like the idea of working with different people.On a personal level I think that this course will give me the discipline to help me achieve my future goals.02br
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00I have been interested in Art & Design since childhood and was quite proactive in my interests.In Poland when studying in High School for my Matura,my subjects didn't include art as in my country there aren't many schools that tough that subject.In my spare time I was always doing something involving art and design such as drawing,painting and decorating.Ive also made my own clothes out of my sisters.I found that being involved in art helped me develop my imagination and creativity.02br
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00I would like to study for BA Fashion womenswear.I know this industry is an exciting highly creative and competitive environment which is very appealing to me.In my head,the idea of becoming involved in this industry is linked to some sort of challenge to become part of it.I'm currently on Fashion for Beginners by CSM graduate Satoshi Date which I find very helpful and exciting.02br
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00It has always been my ambition to study abroad.The United Kingdom offers great opportunities,well respected qualifications and high quality control standards.Living in London gave me lots of inspiration by meeting people from various backgrounds who had different interests.02br
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00After the foundation course i plan to go on to the degree to extend my knowledge and carry on my studies.In the future I would like to see myself either owning my own label or be able to design clothes for brands like Topshop,Diesel,Miss Sixty etc.02br
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00I believe I could achieve maximum from this course and would allow me to express my ideas and creativity.I think I will succeed due to my passion for the subject and willingness to step up for the challenge.02br
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00Thank you for all the posts.02br
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00p.s my deadline is very soon0-
  

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02br 02br 00I have been interested in art and design since childhood and was quite proactive in my interests. Although my high school in Poland didn't offer art, in my spare time I could frequently be found drawing, painting, decorating, and sewting my own clothes out of my sisters. Being involved in art helped me develop my imagination and creativity.

  • 02br 02br 00I have been interested in art and design since childhood and was quite proactive in my interests.
  • Although my high school in Poland didn't offer art, in my spare time I could frequently be found drawing, painting, decorating, and sewting my own clothes out of my sisters.
  • Being involved in art helped me develop my imagination and creativity.
  • 02br 02br 00I would like to specifically study for a BA in Fashion, concentrating in womens clothingwear.
  • I find this industry to be a very exciting, highly creative and competitive environment, which is very appealing to me.
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0I would like to study at [name the foundation by name] to improve and expand my knowledge of art and design and to help me establish the discipline I need to achieve my future goals.02br
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00I have been interested in art and design since childhood and was quite proactive in my interests. Although my high school in Poland didn't offer art, in my spare time I could frequent

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