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Xhey2005x Posted 13 years ago
Grammar
Can somebody look over my english grammar, punctuation, spelling correction?
I am not looking to redo the sentences. Just correcting the language faults, including grammar, punctuation, spelling, and word use. Thank you for helping!
Original:
1.) More then ninety percent of companys now use e-mail therefore employees must become more knowlegable about it's dangers.
2.) Most e-mails and memos delivery straight-foward information that is not sensitive, and require little persuasion.
3.) If I was you I would check all in coming e-mail and attachments that was sent to you and he.
4.) Memos typically contain 4 nesessary parts; subject line, opening, body and action closing.
5.) Fear of inappropriate email use, and the need to boost productivity, has spurred employee monitoring programs.
6.) When you respond too a e-mail message you should not automaticly return the senders message.
7.) Wasnt it Dr Rivers and Ms Johnson who allways wrote there e-mails in all capitol letters.
8.) A list of the names' and addresses' of e-mail recipients were sent using the "bcc" function.
9.) Our information technology department which was formerally in room 35 has moved it's offices to room 5.
10.) The Evening news press our local newspaper featured as its principle article a story entitled, Cyber-slacking is killing productivity!
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My Correction:
1.) More than 90% of companies now use e-mail, therefore employees must become more knowledgeable about it's dangers.
2.) Most e-mails and memos, deliver straight-foward information that is not sensitive, and require little persuasion.
3.) If I was you, I would check all incoming e-mail and attachments that were sent to you and him.
4.) Memos typically contain 4 nesessary parts; subject line, opening, body and action closing.
5.) Fear of inappropriate email uses, and the need to boost productivity, has spurred employee monitoring programs.
6.) When you respond to an e-mail message, you should not automatically return the sender's message.
7.) Wasn't it Dr. Rivers and Ms. Johnson who always wrote their e-mails in all capital letters?
8.) A list of the names' and addresses' of e-mail recipients, were sent using the "bcc" function.
9.) Our information technology department, which were formerally in room 35, has moved it's offices to room 5.
10.) The evening news press our local newspaper featured as its principle article a story entitled, "Cyber-slacking is killing productivity!"
Original:
1.) More then ninety percent of companys now use e-mail therefore employees must become more knowlegable about it's dangers.
2.) Most e-mails and memos delivery straight-foward information that is not sensitive, and require little persuasion.
3.) If I was you I would check all in coming e-mail and attachments that was sent to you and he.
4.) Memos typically contain 4 nesessary parts; subject line, opening, body and action closing.
5.) Fear of inappropriate email use, and the need to boost productivity, has spurred employee monitoring programs.
6.) When you respond too a e-mail message you should not automaticly return the senders message.
7.) Wasnt it Dr Rivers and Ms Johnson who allways wrote there e-mails in all capitol letters.
8.) A list of the names' and addresses' of e-mail recipients were sent using the "bcc" function.
9.) Our information technology department which was formerally in room 35 has moved it's offices to room 5.
10.) The Evening news press our local newspaper featured as its principle article a story entitled, Cyber-slacking is killing productivity!
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My Correction:
1.) More than 90% of companies now use e-mail, therefore employees must become more knowledgeable about it's dangers.
2.) Most e-mails and memos, deliver straight-foward information that is not sensitive, and require little persuasion.
3.) If I was you, I would check all incoming e-mail and attachments that were sent to you and him.
4.) Memos typically contain 4 nesessary parts; subject line, opening, body and action closing.
5.) Fear of inappropriate email uses, and the need to boost productivity, has spurred employee monitoring programs.
6.) When you respond to an e-mail message, you should not automatically return the sender's message.
7.) Wasn't it Dr. Rivers and Ms. Johnson who always wrote their e-mails in all capital letters?
8.) A list of the names' and addresses' of e-mail recipients, were sent using the "bcc" function.
9.) Our information technology department, which were formerally in room 35, has moved it's offices to room 5.
10.) The evening news press our local newspaper featured as its principle article a story entitled, "Cyber-slacking is killing productivity!"
Top answer
) More then ninety percent of companies now use e-mail therefore employees must become more knowlegable about it's dangers. ) Most e-mails and memos deliver straight-foward information that is not sensitive (comma not needed)and require little persuasion. ) If I were you I would check all incoming e-mails and attachments that went sent to you and him .
- ) More then ninety percent of companies now use e-mail therefore employees must become more knowlegable about it's dangers.
- ) Most e-mails and memos deliver straight-foward information that is not sensitive (comma not needed)and require little persuasion.
- ) If I were you I would check all incoming e-mails and attachments that went sent to you and him .
- ) Memos typically contain 4 necessary parts; subject line, opening, body and action closing.
- ) Fear of inappropriate email use (comma not needed) and the need to boost productivity (comma not needed) have spurred employee monitoring programs.
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1.) More then ninety percent of companies now use e-mail therefore employees must become more knowlegable about it's dangers.
2.) Most e-mails and memos deliver straight-foward information that is not sensitive (comma not needed)and require little persuasion.
3.) If I were you I would check all incoming e-mails and attachments that went sent to
2.) Most e-mails and memos deliver straight-foward information that is not sensitive (comma not needed)and require little persuasion.
3.) If I were you I would check all incoming e-mails and attachments that went sent to
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1.) More than ninety percent of companies now use e-mail therefore employees must become more knowledgeable about its dangers.
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3.) If I were you I would check all incoming e-mails and attachments that went sent to you and him.
6.) When you respond to an e-mail message you should not automatically reply the sender's message.
6.) When you respond to an e-mail message you should not automatically reply the sender's message.
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3.) If I were you I would check all incoming e-mails and attachments that were sent to you and him.
6.When you respond to an e-mail message you should not automatically reply to the sender's message.
7. Weren't Dr Rivers and Ms Johnson always wrote these e-mails in all capital letters?
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6.When you respond to an e-mail message you should not automatically reply to the sender's message.
7. Weren't Dr Rivers and Ms Johnson always wrote these e-mails in all capital letters?
Thanks for highlig
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Awence7. Weren't Dr Rivers and Ms Johnson always wrote these e-mails in all capital letters?Please do not answer posts from learners unless you are very competent in English and know for certain what you are writing is correct.
7. Weren't Dr Rivers and Ms Johnson the ones who always wrote their e-mails in all capital
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I apologise for not double checking. But how competent have you proven you are? Flawless? Editing others' mistakes or flawlessly competent.
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AwenceBut how competent have you proven you are?Certainly no one is perfect. We are all human and make mistakes.
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