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CarlitosWay Posted 19 years ago
Letter Writing

Can somebody help me with my motivation letter for an university!!!

0It is very urgent. I have a deadline, must have it finished before monday. I have the following:02br
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00Dear Sir / Madam,02br
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00I am writing to apply for the Master Degree programme in International Management-CEMS. 02br
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00My parents have a Moroccan background. I was born in Amsterdam. Working in the hospitality industry for several years gave me the chance to interact with different people around the world.It has giving me the insigt that different people have different needs.Travelling has taught me to be very openminded and that every country has his own way of conducting business. This is also the reason why I got very interested in international management. When I started travelling I already had begun my Bachlor Degree in Business Administration. My passion for travelling and business has led me to the Master Degree programme in International Management-CEMS. 02br
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00The Netherlands has always been a country that has opened her borders to different nationalities and cultures. The Netherlands is a nation of business people. We are a very popular destination for multinational companies. The Dutch culture I grew up in has given me that kind of enterpreneurial thinking. 02br
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00If we look around us we see that borders are fading, everything is conducted globally. Companies do not constrain their ambitions only till the border they go where there ambition leads them. How do we cope with globalization? This is also why International Management would be interesting to study. 02br
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00I want to study International Management at Erasmus University because I like to be challenged. It is a programme only open to a selective group of students. The chance to meet people from all over the world gives you a valuable advantage to learn more about different cultures. The compulsory internship is very useful in turning your theoretical knowledge into practice.02br
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00At the moment I am in my third year of the Bachlor in Business Administration. It has given me a good base to start the Master Degree programme in International Management. All the books, exams, colleges where in English.02br
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00Thank you very much for considering my request. I look forward to your positive response.02br
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00Kind regards,02br
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0Dear Sir / Madam,02br 02br 00I am writing to apply for the Master Degree programme in International Management-CEMS. 02br 02br 00My parents have a Moroccan background. I was born in Amsterdam.

  • 0Dear Sir / Madam,02br 02br 00I am writing to apply for the Master Degree programme in International Management-CEMS.
  • 02br 02br 00My parents have a Moroccan background.
  • I was born in Amsterdam.
  • Working in the hospitality industry for several years gave me the chance to interact with different people 01font 00[from]02font 00 around the world.
  • Travelling has taught me to be very open01font 00-02font 00minded01font 00,02font 00 and that every country has 01font 00its02font 00 own way of conducting business.
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0Dear Sir / Madam,02br
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00I am writing to apply for the Master Degree programme in International Management-CEMS. 02br
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00My parents have a Moroccan background. I was born in Amsterdam. Working in the hospitality industry for several years gave me the chance to interact with different people 01font00[from]02font
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0Thank you for your help. What do you think about the structure of the letter ?0-

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