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April 26,2011

Saeed Al-Essa

Chief Executive Officer

Specialized Polyclinic Complex

Thru:

Randa Mohammed

Head Nurse

Specialized Polyclinic Complex

Dear Sir/Madam,

I would like to inform you that I don’t want to renew my Iqama and I want to go home for final exit. It is sad to say that I cannot work here until December 2011 because my Canadian Visa will be release earlier than that month. My Canadian Visa will expire if I will stay here longer and I will missed the opportunity to work in Canada.

I apologize for changing my decision of what we have agreed before.

I am willing to extend my stay in Specialized Polyclinic Complex until July 2011 but if you don’t agree I will only stay until my Iqama expired.

Hoping for your kind consideration.

Thank you very much and more power.

Respectfully yours,

Norielen D. Zuyco
  

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Saeed Al-Essa Chief Executive Officer Specialized Polyclinic Complex Dear Dr Al-Essa, I would like to inform you that I will not renew my Iqama but wish to return home . Unfortunately, I cannot work here until December 2011 because my Canadian visa will expire. If I stay here longe r, I will miss the opportunity to work in Canada.

  • Saeed Al-Essa Chief Executive Officer Specialized Polyclinic Complex Dear Dr Al-Essa, I would like to inform you that I will not renew my Iqama but wish to return home .
  • Unfortunately, I cannot work here until December 2011 because my Canadian visa will expire.
  • If I stay here longe r, I will miss the opportunity to work in Canada.
  • I apologize for changing my decision from what we have agreed before.
  • I am willing to extend my stay in Specialized Polyclinic Complex until July 2011 , but if that is not agreeable, I will stay only until my Iqama expires.
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Saeed Al-Essa

Chief Executive Officer

Specialized Polyclinic Complex

Dear Dr Al-Essa,

I would like to inform you that I will not renew my Iqama but wish to return home. Unfortunately, I cannot work here until December 2011 because my Canadian visa will expire. If I stay here longer, I will miss the

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