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Tmn111 Posted 17 years ago
Grammar
Can somebody correct this statement?
It's meant to be a headline.
"Changes in the method of managing the welfare institution in order to achieve mandatory (obligatory?) standards by the example of..."
"Changes in the method of managing the welfare institution in order to achieve mandatory (obligatory?) standards by the example of..."
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Hi, It's much, much too long to be a headline. Can you say it in 6 words or less? Clive
- Hi, It's much, much too long to be a headline.
- Can you say it in 6 words or less?
- Clive
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Hi,
It's much, much too long to be a headline. Can you say it in 6 words or less?
Clive
It's much, much too long to be a headline. Can you say it in 6 words or less?
Clive
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Sorry, I meant it was something like the introduction of an article.
I just want to know if it's correct, especially the words "mandatory" and "obligatory".
I just want to know if it's correct, especially the words "mandatory" and "obligatory".
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Hi,
"Changes in the method of managing the welfare institution in order to achieve mandatory (obligatory?) standards by the example of..."
I just want to know if it's correct, especially the words "mandatory" and "obligatory".
It would be better if you posted the complete sentence.
It sounds like the word you need is 'mandatory'.
Th
"Changes in the method of managing the welfare institution in order to achieve mandatory (obligatory?) standards by the example of..."
I just want to know if it's correct, especially the words "mandatory" and "obligatory".
It would be better if you posted the complete sentence.
It sounds like the word you need is 'mandatory'.
Th
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It was just asked to translate this sentence into English.
The name of institution is supposed to be after "by the example of"
The name of institution is supposed to be after "by the example of"
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Hi,
It's not a sentence, because there is no verb. It sounds like a title.
Using 'by the example of xxxx' like that is incorrect English.
Clive
It's not a sentence, because there is no verb. It sounds like a title.
Using 'by the example of xxxx' like that is incorrect English.
Clive
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Hi,
It's hard to recommend anything without having read the article.
Perhaps "Changes to the management of welfare institutions to achieve mandatory standards, using Xxxx as an example."
Clive
It's hard to recommend anything without having read the article.
Perhaps "Changes to the management of welfare institutions to achieve mandatory standards, using Xxxx as an example."
Clive
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