Can somebody correct half of this letter I have posted?

0This is an assigned letter to my teacher for a portfolio assignment. What I am posting is only a portion of what I have written, just want your feedback for mechanical errors.02br
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00Any great writer possesses the ability to obtain passion, creativity, and style that shapes a great essay or story into something more than just words. It becomes a reality to the author, because their thoughts become words, and words come with a meaning. To compare myself to a great writer, I would say I possess one forth of what I described, and that is creativity. I am able to use descriptive writing as a tool to my short stories, and stress my creativity further. I enjoy utilizing colorful vocabulary to make my writing seem more captivating and theatrical. 02br
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00 00I never really saw myself as a potential story teller, because my greatest weakness has to be grammar errors. When I write, my intentions are to put words on paper, and with natural instincts I assume what comes out are all correct. I realize that I need to be more attentive and read out loud, but I just don’t seem to have it stamped in my head. I always forget, and simply read over my writing once or twice and I imagine my grammars are efficient enough to submit. Another failure that I lack to succeed is being able to organize my papers into a more structured body. This cause is reflected on my forever unmanageable thoughts that seem to take control of almost every ounce of my brain fluids. Thus concluding to the habit of jotting words down and by the time I realized it, it’s too late. 0-