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Dzemik Posted 9 years ago
Grammar

Can somebody check this short text?

Hello. I and other people from Facebook group decided to make something nice for our beloved music band. the problem is we need English caption.


This is what I tried to make:
"Hello!

We are polish Panheads - Skillet fans. We decided to make our own version of "Feel Invincible" and we sang it in Polish. Hope you enjoy this video! If you do - please share it. Thanks! Emotion: wink"

Is it correct?

  

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Your grammar is impeccable. " And "polish" is the stuff I put on my furniture or my car to make it look pretty.

  • Your grammar is impeccable.
  • " And "polish" is the stuff I put on my furniture or my car to make it look pretty.
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Your grammar is impeccable. But I would not use "panhead." It is too close to "pinhead."
And "polish" is the stuff I put on my furniture or my car to make it look pretty.

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