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Najlaa Posted 14 years ago
Letter Writing

Can somebody check my letter

hi all
can somebody check my letter

Dear sir or Madam

I saw your advertisement, and I'm writing for you because I need this job, I have to save some money for my study .

I really interesting on this job, I love visit places and I know the most famous beautiful great places in my city . also i speak 4 language English , French , Spain , and Arabic . I'm so friendly , I love people .

I worked once in visitors business. and I know how to deal with this . I hop you choose my for the job. I'll be so perfect and make you happy .

I look forward hearing from you good news soon
Your sincerely
  

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you have to check your grammar,other than that its good
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Dear Sir or Madam

I saw your advertisement and I'm writing for you because I need this job. I have to save some money for my studies .

I am really interested in interesting on this job, I love visiting places and I know the most famous beautiful great places in my city . Also I speak four la
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