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Melyb023 Posted 22 years ago
Medical & Dental Studies
CAN SOME1 tell me how this sounds for an introduction to a college essay
Growing up in a family with guidance up until the ninth grade. Having no guidance from that oint on because my parents who never really knew anything about the SAT's, applaying to college, financial aid, or how to get me to higher education. I, being lost asked my friends for help and there was just so much they could do. I still had hundreds of questions; I asked teachers and they also had limited answers.
*** me kno wat u think........
*** me kno wat u think........
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You need to work on the punctuation and ensure that you are using complete sentences.
- You need to work on the punctuation and ensure that you are using complete sentences.
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You need to work on the punctuation and ensure that you are using complete sentences.
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I think you need to work on this a little. The first sentence doesn't really make sense. Are you writing about your education, and the support you received from your family?
Do you mean "I attended school up to the ninth grade, and received a lot of support from my family. I found it difficult to find all the information I needed to apply to college for higher education. My family and
Do you mean "I attended school up to the ninth grade, and received a lot of support from my family. I found it difficult to find all the information I needed to apply to college for higher education. My family and
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Well I think that its a nice letter but, you need to work on your spellings and your sentencing doesn't make any sense but, you do sound like a very educated student who cares about your work.Keep on trying your best thought.Good luck with everything!
Yours truely, Brionna
Yours truely, Brionna
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