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Sashianuradhi Posted 15 years ago
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Can some one correct this sentence

I still remember the fear on eyes of his two young children looking though the window of the High Dependency Unit which motivated me to counsel patients in each encounter.

It seems to be something wrong with this sentence I couldn't figure out. Plsease help me

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It seems to be something wrong with this sentence I couldn't figure out. Plsease help meThank you I hope these two small corrections help.

  • It seems to be something wrong with this sentence I couldn't figure out.
  • Plsease help meThank you I hope these two small corrections help.
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sashianuradhiI still remember the fear in the eyes of his two young children looking though the window of the High Dependency Unit, which motivated me to counsel patients in each encounter.It seems to be something wrong with this sentence I couldn't figure out. Pls

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