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00 It's me again. I am so sorry to test so many times. But, I believe this time would work definitely because I didn't copy and past any word in this article.02br
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00Topics: "The only responsibility of corporate executives, provided they stay within law, is to make as possible for their companies."02br
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00There had been many disputes over the issue that the corporate executives, within the law, could do anything they want to make the company profitable. In my opinion, I agree insofar as corporate executives should make as much money as the can and of course within law. But, within the law is not the only responsibility of corporate executives. Or I should say, it should be the least but not the only.02br
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00According to the point the author made, I find it problematic about the topic in two crucial respects. First, among the additional condition of staying within law, a doubtful point in the sentence applied a green judgment - " Is everything perfectly right within the law?" Law is ma-made and it could not be perfect. They are merely the basic principles for business. Supposing that we stretch out from the author's clarification, we will reach a strange conclusion. - If we could find a loophole to exploit, it would be alright to make dirty money just within the law. Nevertheless, it is obviously wrong on the moral grounds. Such dirty money would erode the investors' trust and consequently would make the companies turn into bursting baubles.02br
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00Moreover, the second point is what are the factors diminish the benefits of companies. Someone might guess that they could be sluggish sales, soaring cost, terrible weather, vacillating policy and so forth. But, from my point of view, the key point would be the lack of the trustworthiness. U. C. Wang, the president of Taiwan Plastics, is one of the richest people in Taiwan. He once said that " You need lots of time, work, and money to build a palace, but only a match could destroy it." In other words, no matter what safe bet the entrepreneurs chose, you could not predict when these uncertain factors would devastate your business, If you want to survive and make some profits in the business battlefield, processing within the law is not enough. The honest and integrity are the best policies.02br
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00In sum, those wounded companies in the past remind us today that putting the revenue in the first order could not run a successful business. Within the law should be the least requirement for an executive to run a company. I liken the business to hockey. Borrowing a quote form Wayne Gretzky, - " A good hockey player plays where the puck is. A great hockey player plays where the puck is going to be." The responsibility of corporate executives is not only to make as much money in the face of them but also to take more considerations on non-economic stuff. By the meticulous strategies for perpetuating fortune of companies, the responsibility that entrepreneurs should take is within economics, ethics and surely, within the law.02br
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00Thank you for your patience to read my article. 0-