Can simeone please check my grammar
I love your short movie. This is way better than “A Walk to Remember” and “The Notebook.” I’m sure that your movie is going to have part2, part 3 or a sequel movie.?? I just can’t wait to see the new chapter of your life. Stay in love to one another and be happy.
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" It is too casual and sounds bad. I love your short movie. It is much better than A Walk to Remember and The Notebook .
- " It is too casual and sounds bad.
- I love your short movie.
- It is much better than A Walk to Remember and The Notebook .
- I’m sure that your movie is going to have a sequel.
- I just can’t wait to see the new chapter of your life.
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Don't use "way" for "much." It is too casual and sounds bad.
I love your short movie. It is much better than A Walk to Remember and The Notebook. I’m sure that your movie is going to have a sequel. I just can’t wait to see the new chapter of your life. Stay in love with one another and be happy.
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