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0 00 Could I ask somebody to check my letter, please? 05 0 00 I need help!!! The topic is: Las night a very unusual event happened.Write a statement descibing what you saw. And the Assignment type is: Witness Statement. 02 br
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00 00 Last night, I couldn’t sleep and decided to go for a walk along Green Road about 12.00 p.m. The night was pretty quiet. However, it was dreadfully because I didn’t even see people around. The street lamps were turned on, so there was no problem to notice somebody. I didn’t really pay attention to the cars standing on the curb. However, maybe I should have, because the cars were big, black with dimmed windows. 02 br
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00 00 When I passed them by, I heard strange voices and steps. I quietly turned over and saw five men checking something near the jewellery shop. I was scared stiff. However, I decided to get closer and see what is going on. I hid in a bush, next to the scene. I spotted a man holding a gun and others looking around for something. I couldn’t see them very well, because of the dark, but they had black masks on theirs faces. I even had problem with breathing properly, because of the fear. Suddenly, I realised that one man disappeared. 02 br
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00 00 Unfortunately, that was all I remember. I lost my consciousness and woke up after the burglary by night. I had fainted 00 00 because of the explosion. 02 br
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00 00 The next day I went to police to give an account of the burglary. The police asked me many questions. However, I wasn’t able to answer yet. 030src #f1.gifw 598
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00 00 Last night, I couldn’t sleep and decided to go for a walk along Green Road about 12.00 p.m. The night was pretty quiet. However, it was dreadfully because I didn’t even see people around. The street lamps were turned on, so there was no problem to notice somebody. I didn’t really pay attention to the cars standing on the curb. However, maybe I should have, because the cars were big, black with dimmed windows. 02 br
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00 00 When I passed them by, I heard strange voices and steps. I quietly turned over and saw five men checking something near the jewellery shop. I was scared stiff. However, I decided to get closer and see what is going on. I hid in a bush, next to the scene. I spotted a man holding a gun and others looking around for something. I couldn’t see them very well, because of the dark, but they had black masks on theirs faces. I even had problem with breathing properly, because of the fear. Suddenly, I realised that one man disappeared. 02 br
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00 00 Unfortunately, that was all I remember. I lost my consciousness and woke up after the burglary by night. I had fainted 00 00 because of the explosion. 02 br
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00 00 The next day I went to police to give an account of the burglary. The police asked me many questions. However, I wasn’t able to answer yet. 030src #f1.gifw 598
Top answer
m. The night was pretty quiet. However, it was dreadful 01 del 00 ly 02 del 00 because I didn’t even see people around.
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- The night was pretty quiet.
- However, it was dreadful 01 del 00 ly 02 del 00 because I didn’t even see people around.
- (a bit odd) 02 font 00 I didn’t really pay attention to the cars standing on the curb.
- However, maybe I should have, because the cars were big, black with dimmed windows.
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0 Last night, I couldn’t sleep and decided to go for a walk along Green Road about 12.00 p.m. The night was pretty quiet. However, it was dreadful 01 del 00 ly 02 del 00 because I didn’t even see people around. The street lamps were turned on, so there was no problem 01 del 00 to 02 del 01 font 00 02 font 01 del 0
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0 Hi, 02 br
00 thanks for the revision. What do you mean by 'spot a man', should be here e.g observed man? And why the sentence beginning with 'The steet lamps...' is weird? 0-
00 thanks for the revision. What do you mean by 'spot a man', should be here e.g observed man? And why the sentence beginning with 'The steet lamps...' is weird? 0-
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0 I didn't understand what you tried to say by spot a man and using 01 i 00 to 02 i 00 with 01 i 00 help 02 i 00 in your sentence beginning with 01 i 00 street lamp 02 i 00 didn't sound good to me so I changed it. If you have a better idea add here. 0-
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0 so 'observed a man' is a better idea? What do you think about 'theirs faces'? is it correct? or maybe their faces? 0-
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0 To be open say 01 i 00 he saw a man 02 i 00 and the other one should be 01 i 00 their faces. 02 i 00 0-
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