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Anonymous Posted 11 years ago
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Can I use "for the most part" here?

Hi!
Can I use "for the most part" here? Any other suggestions?

For the most part, my concerts and development as an organist took place here after my arrival; furthermore, I had a chance to play a lot more, as there are lesser organists here per square meter than in Germany.

Thank you!
  

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"For the most part" is OK, but the following text is ambiguous and unnatural! Anonymous as there are lesser organists here per square meter than in Germany. Do you mean: " ...

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  • "For the most part" is OK, but the following text is ambiguous and unnatural!
  • Anonymous as there are lesser organists here per square meter than in Germany.
  • Do you mean: " ...
  • "
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"For the most part" is OK, but the following text is ambiguous and unnatural!
Anonymousas there are lesser organists here per square meter than in Germany.
Do you mean: " ... as there are fewer organists here than in Germany?"
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