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Liveinjapan Posted 19 years ago
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Can I take out "when" at this sentence?

0Hi, I found a line in the book and I'm confused about this line.02br
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00"I had never feelings for her until the moment when our hands touched. Then, strangely, I started noticing her."02br
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00First I thougt that "when" was not necessary for this sentence.02br
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00I think the function of when and the moment is the same.02br
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00And this book is written by some Japanese writer and some Nativespeaker of English.02br
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00Please give me your opinion.0-
  

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0never had feelings02br
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00Yes, you can take the 'when' out.0-
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0Hi, nona the brit.02br
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00Thank you.02br
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00I thougth I could take it out when I first saw this line.02br
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00I think it's up to you weather you take the "when" out 02br
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00And both are grammatically correct.02br
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00If I'm wrong, will you tell me, please.0-
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0 Yes, they are both ok. 0-
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0Thnaks! nona the brit02br
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00I understand perfectly.02br
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00Best Wishes, liveinjapan.0-
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0YEs, I said 'never had feelings'.0-
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