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Anonymous Posted 11 years ago
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Can I reword this sentence somehow?

Hi!

I am not completly satisfied with words I have chosen for this sentence? Can I reword it somehow?

The information provided by Jenny Smith holds reasonable suspicions of emotional and physical violence inflicted by the supervisor, XXX XXX.

Thank you a lot!
  

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The key word to replace here is holds . I would go with creates. The information provided by Jenny Smith creates reasonable suspicions of emotional and physical violence inflicted by the supervisor, *** ***.

  • The key word to replace here is holds .
  • I would go with creates.
  • The information provided by Jenny Smith creates reasonable suspicions of emotional and physical violence inflicted by the supervisor, *** ***.
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The key word to replace here is holds. I would go with creates.

The information provided by Jenny Smith creates reasonable suspicio

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