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Ayan86 Posted 11 years ago
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Can I re-word this sentence?

Hi!
Can I re-word this sentence so that it is more fluent? Or is it okay as it is?

Jimmy spent the money in the amount of EUR 29500 received from LLC “XXX” for the sale of the vehicle, for his own needs.

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It's stiff and awkward. More natural in ieveryday conversation is eg Jimmy sold his car to *** for 29,500 euros, and spent it on things he needed. Clive

— Clive

  • It's stiff and awkward.
  • More natural in ieveryday conversation is eg Jimmy sold his car to *** for 29,500 euros, and spent it on things he needed.
  • Clive
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It's stiff and awkward.
More natural in ieveryday conversation is
eg Jimmy sold his car to *** for 29,500 euros, and spent it on things he needed.

Clive
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