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MelonieG Posted 13 years ago
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Can I make this sentence better

For ESL students, a good song not only has to have good melody and lyrics, but also lyrics that are easy to understand and pronounce.
  

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For ESL students, a good song not only has to have good melody and lyrics, but also lyrics that are easy to understand and pronounce. For ESL students, a good song not only has to have a good melody but also lyrics that are easy to understand and pronounce. If you mean something additional by 'good lyrics', then say so explicitly.

  • For ESL students, a good song not only has to have good melody and lyrics, but also lyrics that are easy to understand and pronounce.
  • For ESL students, a good song not only has to have a good melody but also lyrics that are easy to understand and pronounce.
  • If you mean something additional by 'good lyrics', then say so explicitly.
  • Clive
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For ESL students, a good song not only has to have good melody and lyrics, but also lyrics that are easy to understand and pronounce.

For ESL students, a good song not only has to have a good melody but also lyrics that are easy to understand and pronounce.

If you mean something additional by 'good lyrics', t
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Hi Clive, thank you for your help. Perhaps I should've included the sentence before that. So the two sentences are:

"In my opinion, a good song is a song with a good melody and lyrics. For ESL students, a good song not only has to have a good melody and lyrics, but also lyrics that are easy to understand and pronounce."

What's your suggestion?

Thank you in advance for
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What do you mean by 'good lyrics'? Can you explain a little?
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Lyrics that are clean and meaningful.
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OK.

For ESL students, a good song not only has to have a good melody, but also lyrics that are clean, meaningful, and easy to understand and pronounce.
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Thank you Clive, that sounds good. I'll use it.

One more month with this class, and I'll be done!

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