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Anonymous Posted 12 years ago
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Every year, including 2014, once a quarter spare time activities plan for weekends and holidays for the students of the boarding school is being developed.

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Try rewriting it by beginning thus. Every quarter, I/we/the teachers develop a plan. The purpose of this is .

— Clive

  • Try rewriting it by beginning thus.
  • Every quarter, I/we/the teachers develop a plan.
  • The purpose of this is .
  • .
  • Clive
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Try rewriting it by beginning thus.
Every quarter, I/we/the teachers develop a plan. The purpose of this is . . . .

Clive
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