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To the Moon

Women are truly unique creations. Women are essential to our very existence. Without women, reproduction would be either less exciting or impossible. With that being said, there are some women who make me wish commercialized space travel was not a figment of imagination. Women can be very difficult to deal with on a day to day basis. There facts to support this claim. Women are usually very insecure, with that being said, they tend to be a little harsh on their appearance amongst other things. Women who think that they are always right would be another aspect that really fortifies my stance on herding them up and firing them to space in a rocket. No matter what the case something always deserves a second opinion, last word, or negative statement. Last but not least, and probably the most hated by me would be a woman's natural urge to gossip amongst each other. I truly think this is a genetic defect.

Women tend to prioritize there self-image around those of certain celebrities or images based on societies suppositions. I feel it shouldn't have such an adverse effect on women's insecurity problems. All women exert some form of insecurity, whether it's of self-image, a relationship, or the bias outlook women feel society places on them. Women are extremely beautiful in numerous facets of life. I'm a guy who honestly believes beauty is a trait found within. I've been with the stereotypical beauty queen, and I've been with some women who aren't so blessed with looks. Beauty is a great quality to find within a woman, whether it is with compliments, admiration, or just lending an ear to listen. I adore beauty, but when women belittle themselves, and insist that beauty is only something that super models and actresses' possess. This really disappoints me. If the world only consisted of skinny long legged women, it would only be interesting for a brief moment. Being unique, I guess, is beauty in itself. To constantly hear a woman reiterate her self-imposed flaws, as in saying they look fat, feel as if they are too short, or maybe there skin complexion plays a part. Whatever it may be, they use it as fuel to stay insecure and it is the most profound problem I see with women. Most of the women I know openly speak about their insecurities, mainly about their looks. Women, who are insecure with their looks, usually have a difficult time having a trusting relationship. I would say that this is because they feel unsure that there mate can be or will be content with them. If they feel as if they aren't the best looking, they probably feel that their mate feels the same. Women also have insecurity issues with the way they think society has labeled them inferior to men. I don't think there is a social bias with women much anymore. There are lots of powerful women in this world, and probably more now than ever before. Women need to lighten up on their selves, and understand we are a race together undivided by gender.

I usually tend to adapt or cope with most situations that are presented to me, but dealing with women who always think they are never wrong has to be one of the most difficult. Generally speaking, most women think they have a god given gift to always be right, so they usually tend to argue and fight until you either give in or give up. With that being said, it is hard to compromise with most women. Compromising usually ends in constant complaining and or bickering, for the fact that women think it's there way or the highway. Women complain about the smallest things, and bicker about those of less importance. When women feel some sort of confidence in their choice, outlook, stance, or opinion it is hard to persuade them to think otherwise. I believe some women do have the ability to compromise, and that some women will admit they are wrong if they truly are. I try to be humble about most of these situations, and work for solution somewhere in the middle that satisfies both sides. Women who take the same approach are a very rare breed nowadays.

When women associate amongst each other, usually in a group of two or more, a strange phenomenon takes place. For some odd reason women tend to gossip. In my opinion it is by far the most annoying female flaw. This phenomenon became apparent to me in my early twenties. I would always notice that girls changed their close friends frequently. It took me being close friends with a woman to understand what was causing the odd paradox. Gossip, she said, gossip just summed it all up in a single word. I couldn't believe I never figured it out before. The treachery became more apparent after that moment. I've always known women tend to gossip a lot, but for that to be the main reasoning behind women having such a rapid fluctuation in friends was hard to understand. That meant women had the same outlook on this as I did. If women felt the same about it as I did why is it so common amongst this gender?

So far, everything I've talked about is one of the main reasons behind my belief that finding the right woman would be a difficult if not impossible task. I enjoy women and their beauty. I am in no way a women hater. I just know that finding the right woman for me might pose to be a more difficult task than it would be for some other men. In my past I have collected a bit of knowledge from each and every relationship I was in. Some relationships were very good, and some were great, but none were near perfect. The longer I looked, and dated different women, the more it helped me realize lifelong happiness was the key to a successful marriage. I have tried my hardest in life to not settle for a woman unless she was as close to perfection as possible. I know that to some this may come across as an impossible task but it really is not. I have recently found my perfect partner, and it is mainly due to my inability to settle with an incompatible woman. I understand what qualities make a woman incompatible with me, because settling with an incompatible mate would be a horrible mistake. Everyone is entitled to their own opinion, but now that I've found the one for me the rest can be sent off to the moon