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Cogar Posted 18 years ago
Grammar

Can I have more than 1 descriptor in a sentence?

0Hello all,02br
00 Can the sentence below be improved for conciseness?02br
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00I have given him the book, which is written by Tom and which was bought last month and has a hardcover, so that he can bring it to school to read. 02br
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00Thanks. 0-
  

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0 Hi Cogar,02br 00There are more than one options. 02i 0-

— Hoa Thai

  • 0 Hi Cogar,02br 00There are more than one options.
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0 Hi Cogar,02br
00There are more than one options. Here is one:02br
01i00I gave him the hardcover written by Tom that I’d bought last month for him to read in school.02i0-
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01cite10Cogar12cite10 Can the sentence below be improved for conciseness?12blockquote
10Without a doubt. Here's one possibility.02br
01i00I have given him the hardcover book by Tom purchased last month so that he can take it to school to read.02i02br
00If you bought the book, y
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01cite10Hoa Thai12cite10There are more than one options. 12br
10 This may sound logical, but it's strange. Use instead: 12br
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10When 11b10there is more than one option
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0Hi Marius,02br
00Avangi caught that error of mine too. Thanks! 0-
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