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Anonymous Posted 15 years ago
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Can I get help correcting my Argument letter please
To whom it May Concern:
In the past year I’ve bought many products from your company. Your company has a very good quality item. Shoes, clothes, and accessories, I have buy them for years now, in my opinion some are the best out. Your company items are incomparable to the other brand companies; but, there is a problem some of them are to expensive.
Unaffordable to people with low incomes. The prices go up every time some new product comes out. People have trouble buying them because they are so high on price. The prices get people upset because your company sells them to high, they go as high as $350 dollars on a times. Don’t understand why when there are company’s that sell them much cheaper and the product look just like the one your company sells.
I’m a soccer player I’ve test different items from your company, but especially soccer cleats because they are great to me. The shoes, size, and the colors are a great fit for me. I buy one pair of them every year, but sometimes I need a pair of soccer cleats every 6 months. I have a couple of them and they all work great and look great.
It will be great if you can low the prices down, to a much cheaper price. So that athletes could have a better chance of buying your products, plus with more people buying your products there’s going to be a higher profit for your company.
Thank you for your time, and I look forward for much lower prices in the future.
Sincerely,
In the past year I’ve bought many products from your company. Your company has a very good quality item. Shoes, clothes, and accessories, I have buy them for years now, in my opinion some are the best out. Your company items are incomparable to the other brand companies; but, there is a problem some of them are to expensive.
Unaffordable to people with low incomes. The prices go up every time some new product comes out. People have trouble buying them because they are so high on price. The prices get people upset because your company sells them to high, they go as high as $350 dollars on a times. Don’t understand why when there are company’s that sell them much cheaper and the product look just like the one your company sells.
I’m a soccer player I’ve test different items from your company, but especially soccer cleats because they are great to me. The shoes, size, and the colors are a great fit for me. I buy one pair of them every year, but sometimes I need a pair of soccer cleats every 6 months. I have a couple of them and they all work great and look great.
It will be great if you can low the prices down, to a much cheaper price. So that athletes could have a better chance of buying your products, plus with more people buying your products there’s going to be a higher profit for your company.
Thank you for your time, and I look forward for much lower prices in the future.
Sincerely,
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To Whom it May Concern: In the past years, I’ve bought many products from your company. It has very high-quality items. Shoes, clothes, and accessories - I've been buying them for years now.
- To Whom it May Concern: In the past years, I’ve bought many products from your company.
- It has very high-quality items.
- Shoes, clothes, and accessories - I've been buying them for years now.
- In my opinion, some are the best.
- Your company's items are incomparable to other brands; but, there is a problem: some of them are too expensive.
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To Whom it May Concern:
In the past years, I’ve bought many products from your company. It has very high-quality items. Shoes, clothes, and accessories - I've been buying them for years now. In my opinion, some are the best. Your company's items are incomparable to other brands; but, there is a problem: some of them are too expensive.
Unaffordable to people with low incomes, the
In the past years, I’ve bought many products from your company. It has very high-quality items. Shoes, clothes, and accessories - I've been buying them for years now. In my opinion, some are the best. Your company's items are incomparable to other brands; but, there is a problem: some of them are too expensive.
Unaffordable to people with low incomes, the
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Hi,
Don't start a letter with 'To Whom It May Concern' just because you don't know the person's name. Instead, say
Dear Sir, or Dear Madam, or Dear Sir or Madam,
'To Whom It May Concern' is used only in a small num
Don't start a letter with 'To Whom It May Concern' just because you don't know the person's name. Instead, say
Dear Sir, or Dear Madam, or Dear Sir or Madam,
'To Whom It May Concern' is used only in a small num
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