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Nuwangi28 Posted 15 years ago
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Can I get 6.5 band ?

Research indicates that the characteristics, we are born with have much more influence on our personality and development than any experience we may have in our life which do you consider to be the major influence .



Everyone is born with some much more influence on their personality and might be development, which is depending on their fortune, not for all. So experiences do much more influence to the lives, which should considered as a major influence furthermore.

According to the time period, we act different roles in each age stages in our life time. Therefore we have to face such difficulties, we might be failure and we may be fed up with being living this world .But we can not give up, and should move forward through our experiences. Since no one does the same wrongs twice because of their experiences. In my opinion.... Experiences do much more influence in our life, according to the above debate. For an example, we see some adults and youth react different ways in the same problem and adults solve it well than the youth, if who do not educate like a youth. Because, adults have much experiences than youths. So, they always react through their experiences.

Personality and development can do some influence own life but it always depend on themselves and without any back up. This is built on itself and can not figure out good or bad and its selfish thought, it restricts each connection with others, but sometime people do their work and embark goals individually, it might help without any interrupt.

So, we can see much influence of experiences more than the personality and development to the life. As a human being, we can not live alone without any connection; as well people do learn a lot of things from their life when they mature. That’s reasons of more influence by experiences and it will help and open them into a great life.
  

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5 band? I don't see why not. The uses of many of the words are unnatural.

  • 5 band?
  • I don't see why not.
  • The uses of many of the words are unnatural.
  • They're not necessarily the wrong words, but they're used in awkward ways, making it difficult to follow your train of thought.
  • In a few cases we're just missing articles and prepositions.
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nuwangi28Can I get a 6.5 band?
I don't see why not.

The uses of many of the words are unnatural. They're not necessarily the wrong words, but they're used in awkward ways, making it difficult to follow your train of thought. In a few cases we're just missing articles and prepositions.

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