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Tai Kim Yi Posted 6 years ago
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Can I describe a woman’s body soft as pillow?

Hi,

Does the following sentence sound natural?


I enfold you in my arms, and your body appears to be some soft pillows.


Many thanks,

K

  

Top answer

"Appears" makes it sound like she looks like the pillows, and I think you want her to feel like them, instead. "Some" is a bit awkward. I would delete it.

— Anonymous

  • "Appears" makes it sound like she looks like the pillows, and I think you want her to feel like them, instead.
  • "Some" is a bit awkward.
  • I would delete it.
  • On a side note, be sure she wants to be like pillows.
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"Appears" makes it sound like she looks like the pillows, and I think you want her to feel like them, instead. "Some" is a bit awkward. I would delete it. On a side note, be sure she wants to be like pillows.

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Tai Kim Yi Can I describe a woman’s body soft as pillows?

You can, but to my ear it doesn't sound as complimentary as I think you want it to.

CJ

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