Can I construct a sentence this way?
Staggering around in the park, Tess stops to take a gulp from the water bottle, but it is empty.
anonymous Can I construct a sentence this way? Not really. It sounds like what she is in the park to do is to stagger around.
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anonymousCan I construct a sentence this way?
Not really. It sounds like what she is in the park to do is to stagger around. On a side note, "gulp" is an awfully colorful word for "drink", and there had better be a reason for it.