Can I change it into ...?
We will strengthen deterrence so officials daren't be corrupt, enhance related institutions so they're unable to be corrupt, and strengthen their vigilance so that they have no desire to commit corruption.
Hi, I find the bold part doesn't make good sense. So can I change it into "raise their consciousness/awareness of not wanting to commit corruption"
Thank you.
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zuotengdazuo commit corruption That is probably the most infelicitous phrase in your sentence. The sentence as a whole is awkward. zuotengdazuo their vigilance Who is 'their'?
- zuotengdazuo commit corruption That is probably the most infelicitous phrase in your sentence.
- The sentence as a whole is awkward.
- zuotengdazuo their vigilance Who is 'their'?
- Are they the same as 'they're' and 'they' in your sentence?
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zuotengdazuo commit corruption
That is probably the most infelicitous phrase in your sentence. The sentence as a whole is awkward.
zuotengdazuotheir vigilance
Who is 'their'? Are they the same as 'they're' and 'they' in your sentence?
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